A TUESDAY FEATURE
hosts: Muskaan Ahuja, Lakshmi Iyer
guest editor: Shloka Shankar
Please note:
Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.
Poets are requested to post poems that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.
Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.
If a poet wants feedback, then the poet must mention 'feedback welcome' below each poem that is being posted.
Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.
The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.
Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!
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kids the color of questions
– Adrian Bouter
leafless maples my gratitude jar
– Christopher Patchel
prayer
without words
spring rain
– Bill Kenney
What do all of the above poems have in common?
This week, focus on really paring down to the bare bones of an image. No fluff, no trimmings.
Thanks @Shloka Shankar for being a part of thinkALONG! Enjoyed every moment.
Shloka,
Thank you so much for being the guest editor of thinkALONG!.
The prompts, indeed, shook our thought routines and were worth trying.
#1
caffeine the cognition click
feedback welcome
#1
3/9/23
binocs —
the far now near
yet…
Feedback always welcome
#2 comment welcome over the dragonfly blue mountains