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writeALONG! 16 July

Writer: Muskaan AhujaMuskaan Ahuja

Updated: Jul 16, 2024

A TUESDAY FEATURE

hosts: Muskaan Ahuja, K. Ramesh

guest editor: Anju Kishore


Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.


Poets are requested to post poems (haiku/senryu) that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.


Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.


If a poet wants feedback, then the poet must mention 'feedback welcome' below each poem that is being posted.


Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.


The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.


Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!

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"Reflect on the world that you carry within yourself. It might be recollections of your childhood or yearning for your own future. Just be sure that you observe carefully what wells up within you and place that above everything that you notice around you. Your innermost happening is worth all your love. You must somehow work on that."


--- Letters to a Young Poet, Rainer Maria Rilke



Let's follow this famous piece of advice. Let's sink deep into ourselves for a while to feel what simmers inside, and allow it to “well up”, its poetry to consume us. This week, we shall revel in such haiku.


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Jennifer Gurney
Jennifer Gurney
Jul 27, 2024

#2 7-27-24


arriving home

my mom waves

from the gingko branch


Jennifer Gurney, US

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Jennifer Gurney
Jennifer Gurney
Jul 24, 2024

#1 7-24-24


that instant

when new knowledge

clicks


Jennifer Gurney, US

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#1


Revised, thanks to the possibilities shared by Alan.


no path back home

a sakura petal detaches 

from the branch


Namratha Varadharajan, India


Version1:


sakura detaches 

from branch

no path back home


Namratha Varadharajan, India


feedback welcome

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Thank you, Alan, for working with my ku and showing so many possibilities. Will rework the diction. I love how it sounds after the reversal

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Fatma Zohra Habis
Jul 21, 2024

#2 21/07


Revision 1 by Alan 🌺


ballet ambition

the butterfly dance

resides within me


Fatma Zohra Habis/ Algeria


The Original


party

try the butterfly steps

dancing with wings


feedback welcome🌺🌹

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Fatma Zohra Habis
Jul 22, 2024
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Dear Alan,

Thank you very much for your encouragement and suggestions 🌹🥀


Warm regards 🌺


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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
Jul 21, 2024

#1, 21/7


kite strings the relationships forgotten in passing clouds


Lakshmi Iyer, India

Feedback please

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joanna ashwell
joanna ashwell
Jul 25, 2024
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I like the way you have used relationships entwined with the movement of the kite and clouds, lovely imagery Lakshmi.

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