A TUESDAY FEATURE
hosts: Muskaan Ahuja, Lakshmi Iyer
guest editor: Aparna Pathak
Please note:
Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.
Poets are requested to post poems (haiku/senryu) that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.
Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.
If a poet wants feedback, then the poet must mention 'feedback welcome' below each poem that is being posted.
Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.
The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.
Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!
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One thing that I always try to keep in mind while writing haiku is that it should be about a moment that doesn't take more than a few seconds to experience. We all know that haiku is about showing a visual and is never an interpretation of an experience.
reluctant
to place the last piece
of jigsaw
this rare moment in time
when I can see a solution
--- Keitha Keyes
Here is a beautiful poem to inspire you to write yours, that is your own experience from your daily routine.
#1
21-01-2024
waking up
I forget the dream…
the triviality of it all
Padma Priya
India
#2, 19/01 ( kolams - rangoli)
morning kolams
filling the curves and lines
with spring colours
Lakshmi Iyer, India
feedback please
Revision
sweaty brow dust on my feet from sand-bathing quails
#2 - 19/1/24
sweaty brow dust on my feet from sand bathing quails
Kanjini Devi, New Zealand
feedback appreciated
#2, 18/1/24
Edited: (with grateful thanks to@Lev Hart)
soap bubbles
for a moment I forget
the socks
Original:
soap bubbles
I forget about the socks
for a few seconds
~ Baisali Chatterjee Dutt
Kolkata, India
Feedback always welcome
17/1/24 2nd
rock tumbler
my rough edges polished
with prayer
Marilyn Ashbaugh, USA
feedback welcome