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writeALONG! 13 August

A TUESDAY FEATURE

hosts: Muskaan Ahuja, K.Ramesh

guest editor: Adelaide Shaw


Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.


Poets are requested to post poems (haiku/senryu) that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.


Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.


If a poet wants feedback, then the poet must mention 'feedback welcome' below each poem that is being posted.


Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.


The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.


Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!

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Memorial Day

two Buddy Poppies

in a young girl’s hair           


--- Norma S. Hass

 

Summer is the time of festivals, bazars, fairs, parades, and celebrations outside. Some celebrations are national, some are local, a single village, a church, a neighborhood. 


Whether it be big or small, write a haiku about a festival that means something to you.



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Post 1# 21.8


singing earth

hornbills fly in once more

with people's drums


http://hornbillfestival.com/

Jharna Sanyal

Kolkata India


Feedback welcome

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#2


summer metaphors

the emerging legerdemain

of Magicicada


Alan Summers

UK

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Kalyanee
Kalyanee
Aug 19

20.08.2024

#1


rainbow

on my floors

diwali decor


Kalyanee Arandhara

Assam, India


Feedback most welcome

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#2 8-18-24


pine-scented air

carols sung by candlelight

majestic Christmas Eve


Jennifer Gurney, US


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Dear Jennifer,


re:

pine-scented air

carols sung by candlelight

majestic Christmas Eve


I feel it's overstating Christmas:

  1. pine-scented air

  2. carols

  3. Christmas Eve


We know pine-scented will mean the air scented naturally or unnaturally.

We know carols are sun

We know carols will suggest pre-Christmas Day


What about a new opening line that doesn't state Christmas yet the phrase can work backwards suggesting Christmas.


e.g.


fresh neutral line

pine-scented carols

by candlelight


For instance, other than July, I binge-watch Hallmark Christmas movies during December:


e.g.


Hallmark movies

pine-scented carols

by candlelight


binge-watching

pine-scented carols

by candlelight


Just thinking out aloud.


Alan


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Thanksgiving Day—

what would the Pilgrims

think of football?


Linda Papanicolaou, US

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Good one.

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