A TUESDAY FEATURE
hosts: Muskaan Ahuja, Lakshmi Iyer
guest editor: Marilyn Ashbaugh
Please note:
Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.
Poets are requested to post poems that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.
Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.
If a poet wants feedback, then the poet must mention 'feedback welcome' below each poem that is being posted.
Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.
The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.
Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!
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"The best haiku are barefoot; next, the sandaled; and least, those with shoes."
-- Speculations by Robert Spiess
Robert Spiess states the best haiku are barefoot, so let's walk barefoot along the shore.
What do you feel beneath your feet. . . anchored or uprooted? lost or found?
What do you see in your mind's eye? You as a child or someone/something else ?
lost. . .
I return home
to the sea
-- Marilyn Ashbaugh
Please share your poems with us!
#2 feedback welcome
(On the basis of Thich Nhat Han's teaching)
spring dew . . .
each bare step a kiss
onto the wet mud
I am a water person, deeply drawn to the sound of the waves, the stillness of a lake, brimming with life river or waterfall. So your haiku resonates with me, Marilyn. Your words beautifully expresses my own feelings.
#2. 16.07.2023
the tiny splinter
he p—l–u-cks from my toe
a salty sting
(Feedback welcome)
#2, 15.07.23
turmeric paste —
a family gossip coats
mom's heels
(Feedback welcome)
#1, 14.07.23
Revised, thanks to Muskaan:
watching grandma stand on her toes …hibiscus blooms
Original:
hibiscus bloom
grandma attempts to stand
on her toes
(Feedback welcome)