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triveni spotlight: 5th March 2025

Writer: Anju KishoreAnju Kishore

Updated: Mar 8

triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY hosts: Anju Kishore and Mohua Maulik GUEST EDITOR: Dipankar Dasgupta

5th March 2025


triveni spotlight March 2025



salvation

I slap myself for killing

a mosquito


 

Srinivasa Rao Sambangi

Haiku Society of America Anthology, 2019

 

Theme: Humour

 

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I read a lot of haiku and admit that I can’t connect to everything I read. Some of the poems appeal to me, some don’t. And there are some that I can’t quite grasp and keep coming back to.  


The famous George Swede once wrote to me: 

Keep searching for your own voice. We all begin by imitating poets we admire and then gradually find our own style. 


I have followed his advice. I am yet to find my style, but I think I know now what I am after. 

Keeping this in mind, the only criterion I employed in my selection can be called Excellence. There is no other unique theme for the poems. However, should anyone be looking for more concrete themes, I have assigned to each poem, a theme of its own. These are indicated at the end of the poems. It’s best that I leave it to the readers to decide if they are appropriate. For example, the theme for one of Kala Ramesh’s poems is CLASSIC. For me, classic stands for old gold as in Jane Reichhold. 


I have interpretations for the other themes as well. In all cases though, the poems are more important than the theme titles. What matters is that each one is excellent in my opinion. 

 

Dipankar Dasgupta



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Thank you for being our next guest editor, Dipankar. An interesting March this promises to be.


_()_ triveni spotlight team

3 Comments


Beautifully exptressed.

Nicely worded.

Good choice, Dipankar and congrats, Srinivas.

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Oh!! I usually chant the Forgiveness prayer.. Aparadhakshama prayer.. nice way to put this!

in fact i have a very old poem but was hesitating to send..

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This is a great piece. The double meaning in slap. Slapping himself to swat the mosquito, then slapping himself to atone for the guilt!

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