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thinkALONG! 18 February

Writer's picture: Muskaan AhujaMuskaan Ahuja

A TUESDAY FEATURE

hosts: Muskaan Ahuja, K.Ramesh

guest editor: Milan Rajkumar


Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.


Poets are requested to post poems (haiku/senryu) that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.


Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.


If a poet wants feedback, then the poet must mention 'feedback welcome' below each poem that is being posted.


Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.


The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.


Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!

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YUGEN

A question every haiku poet is asking is, what is yugen? In her words, Kala Ramesh, founder and director of Triveni Haikai India and a Pushcart nominee in a talk with Vinita Agarwal, poetry editor with Usawa Literary Review said "... I came to know that ‘yugen’, an aesthetic nuance meaning elegance, beauty and mysterious grace, is used extensively in tanka. These three factors made tanka my poetic form of choice for this book, the forest I know. I think the following tanka has ‘yugen’."


an evening

of tangled thoughts …

through branches

even this rugged moon

looks tattered at the edges     


                — Kala Ramesh



In our quest for yugen, let's try to feel its mystery, its depth, and its elegance in our self-composed haiku. Take on the challenge!




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Adelaide Shaw
Adelaide Shaw
7 hours ago

Post 1


cold dawn

the slow shift of shadows

to full light


Adelaide B. Shaw

USA

comments welcomed

 

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joanna ashwell
joanna ashwell
6 hours ago
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The repetition of sounds, works so well in this one Adelaide. Atmospheric and beautiful.

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mona bedi
mona bedi
11 hours ago

Post #2

21.2.25


family reunion

the faded rose pink

of mothers tea-cosy


Mona Bedi

India


Feedback appreciated:)

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joanna ashwell
joanna ashwell
6 hours ago
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My Nana always had tea cosies, such a heart-warming image Mona.

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Srini
Srini
16 hours ago

#2 [21.02.2025]


dense fog

just the sound

of a swing


--- Srini, India


Comments welcome

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joanna ashwell
joanna ashwell
6 hours ago
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I can imagine the movement through the fog, very atmospheric Srini. I also like the suggestion of what is not stated as there in the fog.

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joanna ashwell
joanna ashwell
2 days ago

Edit, thanks to Alfred:

 

#2

 

sultry evening

even the frangipani star

kisses the wind

 

Joanna Ashwell

UK

 

Feedback welcome

 


#2

 

sultry evening

even the frangipani

star kisses the wind

 

Joanna Ashwell

UK

 

Feedback welcome

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joanna ashwell
joanna ashwell
6 hours ago
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Thank you so much Kanjini.

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Alfred Booth
Alfred Booth
2 days ago

#1


harvest time

the gnarled vines still yield so much beauty


Alfred Booth

Lyon, France

(feedback welcome)


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Alfred Booth
Alfred Booth
2 days ago
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Thank you, Joanna. I’ve been under the weather and thinking about how old trees still are able to push on.

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