THE HAIBUN GALLERY: 31st August 2023 Lorraine A Padden: Featured Haibuneer

hosts: Reid Hepworth & Shalini Pattabiraman

poet of the month: Lorraine A Padden

31st August 2023

A Thursday Feature

This brings us to the end of a fantastic month with Lorraine A Padden. Thank you so much Lorraine for sharing your work with us and for your insight into your writing practice.

first-born flowers*

In the place where we scattered her ashes last summer, there’s now a tiny crown of purple shoots adorning the snow.

early March

just enough green

to believe

*The title is taken from a Shakespeare sonnet

Source:

tinywords 23.1 3/24/23

THG:

Lorraine, this is such a moving haibun. It touched me deeply. Speaking for myself, I have found writing haibun (in particular) to be a cathartic practice when it comes to dealing with the hard stuff that life tends to throw. Is haibun your go-to for writing or are you drawn to any other forms (haiku/tanka/free-verse, etc). And finally, many of your haibun’s titles have links to Shakespeare…can you speak to that?

Lorraine:

Thank you so much, Reid. I absolutely consider writing in general and all of these wonderful haiku-inspired short forms in particular to be sources of catharsis, healing, as well as great happiness. I do enjoy writing free verse, but these days I’m more fully drawn to the particular choice-making involved with haiku practice. I find haiku to be foundational–and starting from that base, I also love exploring its many potential flowerings! Sometimes haiku moments invite a bit more room to stretch out–additional lines, some prose, a haiga image, a sequence, other voices in rengay or split sequences, or a group renku. They’re all part of my practice.

Thank you for the question on the Shakespeare links in some of my haibun. It’s a wonderful collaboration that Alan Peat, Diana Webb, and I embarked on a few months ago in which each of us borrows a word/phrase from a Shakespeare sonnet. These evocative snippets may contribute additional meaning(s) to the haibun that emerge. Sometimes our individual pieces refer back to themes in the original sonnet but it’s not a requirement. We’re making our way through all 154 of these rich offerings which is a great way for me to anchor my haibun writing in a weekly practice and engage in supportive read/critique with two very fine poets!

Prompt: 28 words. This impactful haibun is tiny, yet it delivers on so many levels. The challenge for this week is to write a haibun under 50 words. Have fun!

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