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THE HAIBUN GALLERY: 20th February 2025. Alice Wanderer, featured poet

Writer: Shalini PattabiramanShalini Pattabiraman

hosts: Shalini Pattabiraman & Vidya Shankar

A Thursday Feature

20th February 2025


This month we have the pleasure of celebrating the work of Alice Wanderer


Alice Wanderer has been dabbling in haiku for decades but only became excited about haibun in 2018 or so after reading work produced by Kala Ramesh and her students on Facebook. Alice's book of translations of the haiku of Sugita Hisajo, Lips Licked Clean (Red Moon Press) won a Touchstone Award in 2021. Her first chapbook, Flow, deals with the rivers and beaches of her local place and indigenous dispossession. Her second, She Wants to See Birds and Flowers, will be appearing on the Snapshot Press website in the spring of 2025. 


Here's the fourth haibun in the series where we showcase Alice's work.


Alice Wanderer

Language Matters


I was—in the passive voice—born, expelled from my mother bruised black and she too was cut with a knife by a man in a mask. Sexed, weighed, washed, wrapped, I was laid to sleep in a cot not a word said to credit my part in the battering work of my birth. Contrariwise—my mother tongue tells me—I’ll die like I laugh, lose control wet myself … grammatically the agent.


insect-catcher

antics—a streetlight

turns on



Alice shares some of the influence that Japan has had on her writing, 'Living in Japan (my third country after the UK and Australia) has had a profound effect on my sensibility. To some degree, as I learned the language etc, I recapitulated my childhood. And then children were born there and had their early years there. I don’t read a great deal (in any language) but I watch a lot of Japanese tv series and films. I have Japanese friends and a close English friend who is a very longtime resident in Japan. I’m sure this impacts my writing but I cannot pinpoint exactly how. Perhaps I project fewer orientalist fantasies on Japan than many other westerners do. I possibly have a more historically informed understanding of haiku than many other westerners so am not over concerned with was it “is”. I don’t believe that Japanese haiku and English Language haiku are commensurate, though. Even so they can usefully influence one another.


My haibun has become more concerned with psychological issues over time but I am still interested in ecological, historical and political matters.'


Prompt:


This week, explore the inner world that is often revealed by the actions we choose. What sort of psychological influences provoke the actions you undertake at the most significant moment in your life.



PLEASE NOTE:

1. Only two haibun per poet per prompt.

2. Share your best-polished pieces.

3. Please do not post something in a hurry or something you have just written.

    Let it simmer for a while.

4. Post your final edited version on top of your original verse.

5. Don't forget to give feedback on others' poems.


We are delighted to open the comment thread for you to share your unpublished haibun (within 300 words) to be considered for inclusion in haikuKATHA monthly journal.


Important: Since we're swamped with submissions, and our editors are only human, mistakes can happen. Please, please, remember to put your name, followed by your country, below each poem, even after revisions. It helps our editors; they won't have to type it in, saving them from potential typos. Thanks a ton!


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#1 - 24/02/25


The Library


From a young age I sought solace among books.  I read everything from science fiction to astronomy.  I even immersed myself in paleontology.  And when I came across the Wizard of Oz, I could not put the book down. Was there really such a place?  The line between reality and fantasy blurred. When I finished the book, I hid it in a different section. I wondered how I might acquire a pair of ruby slippers of my own.

 

secret garden only elves and fairies may enter


Kanjini Devi, NZ

feedback welcome

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Sending you love Kanjini, childhood sadness is so painful.

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mona bedi
mona bedi
Feb 23

Post #1

24.2.25


Utopia


It’s a perfect morning. The night was perfect too. I slept well, dreamt well and woke up well. I check in with my mind…

positive thoughts ++

negative thoughts +

Happiness +/-

Fear -

Satisfied with my daily mind report I get down to finishing my chores. Watering the plants, talking on the phone with my son and daughter and getting ready for work fill my morning.

I then pick out a bright pink kurta with a white dupatta for that perfect summer vibe. A dash of dark black kajal and a fuchsia lipstick prepare me for the day ahead.

As I sit behind the wheel another check in :


positive thoughts +

negative thoughts ++


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I really like this Mona, our thoughts are so important and not always so easy to control. The shift to putting a fake smile on your face, elevates this to link beautifully with the ku at the end.

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#2


Pathfinding


"The twisted tree lives its life,

while the upright tree ends up in planks."

Chinese proverb


Bonsai masters wire or weight straight trunks and branches to imitate the growth in the wild. There, certain trees flow willow-like with the wind, others find their grace curving out over cliffs in a plunge to seek freedom below the open skies, while others grow among their shaded brothers winding their way ever upwards. I could never imitate this successfully: forcing a branch to grow right when its nature was to grow left was similar to forcing a left-handed child to only use the right. And if his destiny were to become another Michelangelo?


Nowadays, I use both of mine in a…


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Thank you, Kanjini, for your comments and especially that concerning the last line in the haiku. I’ll pass on your revision; I do feel “this is enough” reflects the kind of message many of us search for all of our lives. Your version without a capping line seems unfulfilled.


Maybe I should have written it with a slightly different format:


out of the way

sages and forests breathe the sky

this is enough

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#1 23/02/25


Days of the Mermaids


They come to me with the ocean waves at the foot of my bathtub. Cascading in, like little ideas, that then grow and bloom into swishing tails, and dark flowing hair. Their baby faces somber, as they glance over their shoulders at me, as though afraid I’ll lose focus and they might dissipate with the soap suds. 


But, I’ve raised them with the yellow rubber duck of my stillborn. 


                   ebbing tide ...

                   only the chipped coral-reds

                   of my toenails


Firdaus Parvez, India

feedback welcomed :)

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Thank you Kanjini. (It’s not personal but about someone close)

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I had to read the haibun a few times to get it. That last sentence is the best. This will stay with me. Thank you for sharing this beautiful haibun by Alice. Great prompt too!

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