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THE HAIBUN GALLERY: 05 December 2024 — Matthew Caretti, featured poet

Writer's picture: Vidya ShankarVidya Shankar

hosts: Vidya Shankar & Shalini Pattabiraman

A Thursday Feature.

poet of the month: Matthew Caretti

05 December 2024


Matthew Caretti


Matthew has been influenced in equal parts by his study of German language and literature, by the approach of the Beat writers, by his travels and his Zen monastic training. After leaving the Seo-un Hermitage, Matthew engaged in a pilgrimage through South Asia before returning to Africa, where he had lived and worked as a Peace Corps Volunteer. He served as Principal at Amitofo Care Centre, an orphanage and school for five hundred children in Malawi, and as director of the same NGO’s centre in Lesotho. Matthew now teaches English and leads a simple life in Pago Pago, American Samoa. His collections include Harvesting Stones (2017, winner of the Snapshot Press eChapbook Award), Africa, Buddha (2022, Red Moon Press) and Ukulele Drift: Poems from a Small Island (2023, Red Moon Press). His prose and poems appear regularly in Frogpond, Modern Haiku, contemporary haibun online, Hedgerow, Cattails, Tiny Moments and several other journals. He is the recipient of a 2024 Touchstone Award for his haibun ‘Deep Water Port’.


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Welcome to The Haibun Gallery, Matthew. We are honoured to feature you and your work all through this month. 

 

Slight Variations on the Transience of It All 

 

A rainy season echo. In each

cardinal direction the cock’s crow.

The cruise ships and tourists

called back into the deep port.

And yet.

 

scuba tanks respirating instead hospital beds

 

A steady pulse in the humid

suck and stir of a grandma’s fan.

Manned by the son of her son.

The rest gather round. Minding

the machines.

 

windfall accounting for failing heartbeats

 

At the church, they gather

for bingo. The randomness in it all.

The wide smile of the moon before

thunderheads stack the horizon.

Then shutter-slam.

 

angel wings in the iced tea mosquito season

 

Just at the stroke of midnight a ghost

crab out of the storm drain. Reason

to continue this weekend bender.

And gratitude for the forgetfulness

of living on an island.

 

inoperable the number of colors rainbows don’t have


—Tiny Moments Volume 3, May 2024


Standing by Mirror Pond


ode

        to

            a

                leaf

                        fallen on

                               water

 

How to echo the inborn praise of that which is?

 

                           water

                  on a fallen

                leaf

            into

        an

ode

    

 

—    Cattails, October 2022


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VS: So, Matthew, how did you first discover there was a poet in you? And, how did you discover haibun?      

 

MC: During grad school, I had dabbled in poetry, though my thesis advisor, a poet himself, pointed me toward prose. As I then began my career in teaching, a versified path was put aside in favor of pedagogy. My first post was at a university outside Daegu, ROK, and three years there led me to a dedicated Zen practice and rather coincidental introduction to haibun when I was gifted a copy of Basho’s Oku no Hosmichi. This text revealed a way to extend my practice, to empower my mindful living and allow it some expression, thus reawakening that poetic impulse first felt many years earlier as a student.


VS: Could you tell us something about your writing process? Do you write every day or only when an idea forms in your head?


MC: I tend to write every day, and find the early morning best suited to that. First a bit of yoga and meditation, then a coffee and into fragments and phrases scribbled in my notebook. Those could represent observations from days or even weeks ago, or have arisen within the discursive mind during that morning’s meditative sitting. While I initially strive to form nearly all those traces of lived experience into haiku, I often know rather immediately they’d function better as the poetic prose in a haibun. Others “work,” at least initially, and will then go on to a more refined process of review and revision. It’s quite rare for a piece to form a perfect circle of possible meanings as a first draft. 


Prompt for members:


The paradox that a mirror is: it shows us what we are, yet we are not wholly that. We are looking for poems that that explore the enigma of a mirror and deal with the concept metaphorically.

Haibun outside this prompt can also be posted!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Important: Since we're swamped with submissions, and our editors are only human, mistakes can happen. Please, please, remember to put your name, followed by your country, below each poem, even after revisions. It helps our editors; they won't have to type it in, saving them from potential typos. Thanks a ton!


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PLEASE NOTE:

1. Only two haibun per poet per prompt. Please put your name and country of residence under your poem, it makes the editors' work easier. Thanks.

2. Share your best-polished pieces.

3. Please do not post something in a hurry or something you have just written.

Let it simmer for a while.

4. When poets give suggestions and if you agree to them - post your final edited version on top of your original version.

5. Don't forget to give feedback on others' poems.


We are delighted to open the comment thread for you to share your unpublished haibun (within 300 words) to be considered for inclusion in the haikuKATHA monthly journal.

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
2024年12月11日

#1, revised, 16/12


Soundless


I rush to the washroom

open the tap to its full...

my tears run through

my choked voice


Pale, fatigued

disgusted, angry

I call out to my ancestors

questioning

the dynasty of truth


Tonight, the sky is bare

stars hidden under

dark rain clouds


In the mirror

I see my grandkids

looking at me

and I hear

my inner voice prompting

me to be just me


roll of honour—

a white butterfly flutters

the rising sun


11/12, original


Soundless


I rush to the washroom

opening the tap at its fullest

my tears run through

the choked voice.


Pale and fatigue

disgusted and angry

I call out to my ancestors

questioning

the dynasty of truth?


Tonight the…


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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
2024年12月11日
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Thank you. I read about white butterfly in the Google as very pure and spiritual. And I have my name in the roll of honour in my school which is just me. So nobody can take that from me!!

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mona bedi
mona bedi
2024年12月10日

Post #2

10.12.24


Memory lane


I walk past the shop again. Its display window boasts of good looking mannequins dressed up in bridal finery. “Stop staring mom!” my daughter chides. “Go in and buy something or just leave” she says. I linger a little longer. How could I tell her that my reflection in the storefront glass of that shop was unrecognisable.


pleasure rain

the pull and release

of a lost summer


Little did she know that after a certain age we refuse to believe how the years have caught up with our physicality.


becoming one with my shadow high noon


Mona Bedi

India


Feedback appreciated:)

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Vidya Shankar
Vidya Shankar
2024年12月11日
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Very nicely done, Mona, especially the two ku. However, I feel the prose could do with some edits. Here's a suggestion for you to take or toss.


Memory lane


I walk past the shop again. Its display window boasts of good looking mannequins dressed up in bridal finery. “Stop staring mom!” my daughter chides me. “Go in and buy something or just leave.”


I linger a little longer. How could I tell her that my reflection in the storefront glass was unrecognisable!


pleasure rain

the pull and release

of a lost summer


becoming one with my shadow high noon


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Gauri
Gauri
2024年12月10日

#2

10/12/2024

Feedback welcome 🙏🏻


Sans Mirror


I smudge the color corrector lightly. There are so many more layers to add—the concealer, the foundation, the dusting powder, the setting spray. Am I layering them in the right order? What if I mess up a step?


The homeopath calls it grief—this hyperpigmentation.


Maybe I’ll just carve "G R I E F" in bold strokes across my forehead with the light concealer stick—for the curious ones.


autumn morning

the glow on her face–

even in death


Gauri Dixit, India

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Gauri
Gauri
2024年12月11日
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Thank you Lorraine

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Sandip Chauhan
Sandip Chauhan
2024年12月10日

#1 Faultlines Returning after years, I find traces of myself in places long forgotten: the etched window ledge, the worn courtyard tiles, the sagging roof, the labyrinth of the street. The mirror is smaller than I remember, its ornate frame chipped and splintered. I lift it carefully, its cracks dividing my face into pieces I struggle to recognize. The walls hold a silence heavy with my mother’s footsteps, the cadence of my childhood laughter. This house remembers more of me than I do.

summer dusk . . .

a gecko’s silhouette

traces the wall Sandip Chauhan, USA feedback welcome

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Sandip Chauhan
Sandip Chauhan
2024年12月11日
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thank you, Lorraine

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
2024年12月10日

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