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TANKA TAKE HOME – 26 March, 2025 | poet of the month – Madhuri Pillai

Writer: Priti AisolaPriti Aisola

hosts: Firdaus Parvez, Kala Ramesh, Priti Aisola & Suraja Menon Roychowdhury

Introducing a new perspective to our Wednesday Feature!


poet of the month: Madhuri Pillai

 

wetlands ...

two pacific black ducks

glide past the reeds

away from the madding crowd

the world as it should be

 

(Catchment - Poetry of Place Edition 1)

 

nodding off

to the rhythm of the train

swaying

giving into whatever

this journey holds

 

(red lights) Jan 2017

 

OM

the primordial hum

of the earth ...

fusing the past

to the present to the future

 

(Blithe Spirit, Vol 29,No.4 )

 

mesmerized 

by the sway of conifers

I watch 

through parted curtains

the day's trajectory 

 

(the art of tanka, issue 3, fall/ winter 2024)

 

Madhuri Pillai bio:

Madhuri Pillai was born in India, but she has lived in Australia for a major portion of her life. 

 

She is an English (Hons.) graduate and a journalist by profession. 

 

Reading and writing have always been her passion, and she is also an animal activist. 

 

Madhuri lives in Melbourne with her family which includes Rosie, her fur baby.

 

Prompt for this week:

On a train, 'nodding off to its rhythm', soporific and lulling, the poet allows herself to witness and receive whatever experience the journey brings with it. And, sitting by her window, she surrenders herself to whatever nature has to offer in terms of sights and sounds.

 

The train is often seen as a metaphor for life – a journey with different stops or rites of passage, a movement towards a destination or not; of staying on track or going off-track; of experiences with familiar fellow passengers or strangers; of going along with the varying rhythms of life, of hopping off at an unplanned station/stop to feel a sense of adventure, and so on.

 

As you read and re-read and enjoy Madhuri Pillai’s lovely tanka, write poems on any theme of your choice. Or, write about journeys, more specifically about trains or a train journey. Or, write about a moment when you were ‘mesmerized’ by something.


Give this idea some thought and share your tanka and tanka-prose with us here. Keep your senses open, observe things that happen around you and write.You can post tanka and tanka-prose outside this theme too.


PLEASE NOTE:

1. Post only one poem at a time.

2. Only two tanka and two tanka-prose per poet per prompt.

   Tanka art of course if you want to.

3. Share your best-polished pieces.

4. Please do not post something in a hurry or something you have just written. Let it

    simmer for a while.

5. Post your final edited version on top of your original verse.

6. Don't forget to give feedback on others' poems.


We are delighted to open the comment thread for you to share your unpublished tanka and tanka-prose (within 300 words) to be considered for inclusion in haikuKATHA monthly magazine.

 



 

 

 

 

 

7 opmerkingen


Alfred Booth
Alfred Booth
an hour ago

#1


after twenty years

I know these tracks well

today

their end-station has become

my daily heartbeats with you


Alfred Booth

Lyon, France

(feedback welcome)


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Mohua
Mohua
3 hours ago

#1


awaiting final diagnosis...

well-wishers bring cheer

with talk

of world politics

and Delhi pollution


Mohua Maulik, India


Feedback appreciated.

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Alfred Booth
Alfred Booth
an hour ago
Reageren op

Mohua,


I’m still a stickler for the tanka’s form, so your overly long L1 bothers me.


This wait for possible bad news paired with friends bringing “cheer” of the weight of politics and pollution seems to offer a very dark poem, as if you know the outcome of the results to be negative. Perhaps this is your intent.


May I suggest a revision?


final diagnosis . . .

well-wishers bring their gloom

taking only

of world politics

and Delhi pollution

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Mohua
Mohua
3 hours ago

What a treat these exquisite tanka by Madhuri Pillai! Thanks a lot for sharing.

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Sumitra  Kumar
Sumitra Kumar
7 hours ago

#1. 26/3/25


do they love posing 

like us or is it the humans 

who mimic? 

anyway the hanuman langur

is ‘doing’ less and ‘being’ more


Sumitra Kumar

India

Feedback welcome

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Alfred Booth
Alfred Booth
a few seconds ago
Reageren op

Sumitra,


For the moment, this seems very jumbled in its wording. I like that the object of “they” is revealed later. IMO, “anyway” adds nothing to the poem.


L2-3 might be better more simply expressed as “like us or do we / mimic them?” Your “humans” is redundant here. It’s understood in the “us.”


However I’m completely lost in your thoughts for L5.


Could you not restructure the entire poem to show the monkeys “doing less” in one part and “being more” in the other?


Just a few thoughts.


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Sumitra  Kumar
Sumitra Kumar
7 hours ago

Thank you, TTH, for another set of beautiful tanka from Madhuri!

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