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TANKA TAKE HOME - 25 December 2024 | artist of the month - Prakash Thombre

hosts: Firdaus Parvez, Kala Ramesh, Priti Aisola & Suraja Menon Roychowdhury

Introducing a new perspective to our Wednesday Feature! artist of the month: Prakash Thombre


25th December 2024


Prakash Thombre's ink sketch done with a handmade colapen


Let the music begin… In that moment, his mind is a perfect balance of focus and surrender—he is the architect of sound, yet a vessel for something greater. His heartbeat synchronizes with the rhythm yet to unfold, aware that with this first movement, he is about to transform silence into something transcendent.




The challenge for this week:


Timing is important in music. Be it Indian or Western music, time, intervals, and pauses are what make music memorable.

Can you correlate this to your poetry or to life itself?

Give this idea some thought and share your tanka and tanka-prose here. Keep your senses open, observe things that happen around you, and write!


You can post tanka and tanka-prose outside this theme too.


An essay on how to write tanka: Tanka Flights


PLEASE NOTE: 1. Post only one poem at a time. 2. Only two tanka and two tanka-prose per poet per prompt. Tanka art of course if you want to.

3. Share your best-polished pieces. 4. Please do not post something in a hurry or something you have just written. Let it simmer for a while. 5. Post your final edited version on top of your original verse. 6. Don't forget to give feedback on others' poems. We are delighted to open the comment thread for you to share your unpublished tanka and tanka-prose (within 300 words) to be considered for inclusion in the haikuKATHA monthly magazine.


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nalini shetty
nalini shetty
an hour ago

#1.......25/12/24

a metronome click

lost among autumn leaves

each fading beat

reminds me how life sways

to rhythms unseen


Nalini Shetty

India


feedback welcome

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Gauri
Gauri
6 minutes ago
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Love how this tanka flows smoothly. I read about metronome , it fits so well with the autumn leaves and the fading beat. Lovely

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Kanjini Devi
Kanjini Devi
5 hours ago

#1 - 25/12/24


Sattvic Space

 

We have gathered to celebrate the couple’s wedding anniversary.  Most of us are old friends who have shared the love of kirtan for decades, and others are friendly strangers.  Each guest arrives with a cushion in one arm and a gift in the other.  After hugs and introductions, we take our seats, some on chairs, some on the mat.  The wife sits to my left with her harmonium, and the husband sits to my right with his mridangam.  They are both Hare Krishna devotees, so the feast will certainly be sublime.  But first we chant. 

 

AUM vibrating

through floorboards

I listen

to the unstruck sound

of my heart chakra


Kanjini Devi, NZ  

feedback…


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nalini shetty
nalini shetty
an hour ago
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I find this immersive and spiritually resonant. The prose vividly captures the warmth of the gathering while the tanka shifts inward exploring a profound personal moment. The imagery of "AUM vibrating through floorboards" bridges the physical and metaphysical beautifully. To enhance the piece the prose could briefly reflect on the collective energy of the chant aligning it more closely with the tanka's introspection. A lovely balance of community and inner stillness.

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Gauri
Gauri
9 hours ago

#1

25/12/2024


Feedback welcome


your breath stops

and the moment echoes in

my mind forever

like the hush that follows

a deeply moving symphony


Gauri Dixit, India


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Gauri
Gauri
12 minutes ago
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Thank you Nalini. Love your suggestion, will mull over it.

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Gauri
Gauri
9 hours ago

What a beautiful prompt. The sketch just flows.

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