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TANKA TAKE HOME - 18 December 2024 | artist of the month - Prakash Thombre

hosts: Firdaus Parvez, Kala Ramesh, Priti Aisola & Suraja Menon Roychowdhury

Introducing a new perspective to our Wednesday Feature! artist of the month: Prakash Thombre


18th December 2024


Prakash Thombre's experimental illustration in ink.



Prakash Thombre says: The Waiting…a timeless limbo where anticipation and uncertainty intertwine, holding hopes and dreams suspended



The challenge for this week:


Isn't life about waiting... waiting for things to happen or not to happen?

The waiting can kill us at times.

Give this idea some thought and share your tanka and tanka-prose here. Keep your senses open, observe things that happen around you, and write!


You can post tanka and tanka-prose outside this theme too.


An essay on how to write tanka: Tanka Flights


PLEASE NOTE: 1. Post only one poem at a time. 2. Only two tanka and two tanka-prose per poet per prompt. Tanka art of course if you want to.

3. Share your best-polished pieces. 4. Please do not post something in a hurry or something you have just written. Let it simmer for a while. 5. Post your final edited version on top of your original verse. 6. Don't forget to give feedback on others' poems. We are delighted to open the comment thread for you to share your unpublished tanka and tanka-prose (within 300 words) to be considered for inclusion in the haikuKATHA monthly magazine.


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Gauri
Gauri
27 minutes ago

#2

21/12/2024

Feedback appreciated 🙏🏻


many years

all these people

random gaps in between

doesn’t life feel like

a poorly formatted page?

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C.X. Turner
C.X. Turner
30 minutes ago

21/12/24 #2


footsteps echo

down the frozen street

I walk slowly

this heaviness feels

older than the stars


C.X. Turner, UK


(feedback welcome)

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Gauri
Gauri
25 minutes ago
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Lovely tanka. Lines 4 and 5 beautifully complement the theme of waiting.

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#2 20/12


on the branch a cocoon

a butterfly will emerge soon

I wait patiently

for the dawn to break

after a dark night


Fatma Zohra Habis/ Algeria


Feedback welcome 🌺

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C.X. Turner
C.X. Turner
28 minutes ago
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I like this, Fatma. The first two lines feel a little wordy though... The last line works really well with highlighting the light/dark in this poem.

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
15 hours ago

I wait

and wait

for things to happen ...

a raven

perched on a lamppost


Kala Ramesh #1

Feedback welcome

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C.X. Turner
C.X. Turner
25 minutes ago
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The simplicity of this is appealing, Kala. I enjoy how it leaves you thinking about the raven...

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Linda Papanicolaou
18 hours ago

summer spent

in the company

of ancestors—

I become another ghost

among the gravestones


Linda Papanicolaou, US

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