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TANKA TAKE HOME - 11 December 2024 | artist of the month - Prakash Thombre

Writer's picture: Kala RameshKala Ramesh

Updated: Dec 14, 2024

hosts: Firdaus Parvez, Kala Ramesh, Priti Aisola & Suraja Menon Roychowdhury

Introducing a new perspective to our Wednesday Feature! artist of the month: Prakash Thombre


11th December 2024


Prakash Thombre's ink sketch and the short note: A conversation with a close friend over coffee is like a quiet symphony of souls. In the warmth of a shared cup, the world slows down, and the essence of human connection reveals itself. Words flow effortlessly, like steam rising from the coffee, carrying with them the weight of unspoken emotions, dreams, and fears. It’s not just about what is said but about the silence that speaks between the sips, the knowing glances, the shared history. In these moments, time ceases to be linear, and the conversation becomes a reflection of the deeper rhythms of life—an exchange that transcends mere words, leaving both hearts a little lighter, a little more attuned to the quiet beauty of friendship.


The challenge for this week:

Take your readers on the journey of discovery. Talk about companionship, a friendship that has deepened over the years—tell us all about this and more!

Give this idea some thought and share your tanka and tanka-prose here. Keep your senses open, observe things that happen around you and write.


You can post tanka and tanka-prose outside this theme too.


An essay on how to write tanka: Tanka Flights


PLEASE NOTE: 1. Post only one poem at a time. 2. Only two tanka and two tanka-prose per poet per prompt. Tanka art of course if you want to.

3. Share your best-polished pieces. 4. Please do not post something in a hurry or something you have just written. Let it simmer for a while. 5. Post your final edited version on top of your original verse. 6. Don't forget to give feedback on others' poems. We are delighted to open the comment thread for you to share your unpublished tanka and tanka-prose (within 300 words) to be considered for inclusion in the haikuKATHA monthly magazine.


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Mohua
Mohua
Dec 18, 2024

#2

 

colorful skirts

swaying to the beat of dandiya

but it takes two

of us to tango — the thrust

and parry of words

 

Mohua Maulik, India


Feedback appreciated. 


Dandiya is a celebratory group dance performed with sticks which represent the sword of Goddess Durga. The sound of the sticks is believed to ward off evil.

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TjmRQr3T-TQ

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Mohua
Mohua
Dec 19, 2024
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Thank you, Joanna :)

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Florence Heyhoe
Dec 17, 2024

phone call

your smile sweetens

my ears

all the seasons

we have tasted


Florence Heyhoe Northern Ireland

Open to critique please

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joanna ashwell
joanna ashwell
Dec 18, 2024
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I like the tenderness in this Florence.


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Adelaide Shaw
Adelaide Shaw
Dec 17, 2024

Post 1


only a few weeks

do I know her

yet, she is my friend

over coffee or drinks

we forge a bond

 

Adelaide B. Shaw

USA

comments welcomed

 

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
Dec 16, 2024

whistling 

on asthmatic breath

I tune in to the autumn dust ...

its golden sunset


Kala Ramesh #2

Feedback most welcome. It's outside of the prompt.

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joanna ashwell
joanna ashwell
Dec 18, 2024
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This is beautiful Kala. I can feel the struggle to breathe but is is contrasted powerfully with the golden sunset.

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Linda Papanicolaou
Dec 16, 2024

in the shade

of the old platanus

his family

telling stories from the days

before I knew them


Linda Papanicolaou, US

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