hosts : Sanjuktaa Asopa & Aparna Pathak
darkening the shade
between touching apples
the shadow of a wren
-- John Barlow
(Commended, Haiku Presence Award 2014 )
open sky :: SAMVAAD | 9nd June
Updated: Jun 10
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Thank you all for commenting. Since the poet hasn't offered us any backstory, your comments are all the more welcome. For me, it's a perfect example of a traditional haiku. 17 syllables too, if you haven't noticed :-)
It's beautiful. Such close observation.
An unusual ku! Lovely
Most beautiful.
Beautiful!