hosts : Sanjuktaa Asopa & Kashiana Singh
not every color
has a name . . .
midnight jazz
---- Tiffany Shaw-Diaz
( Stardust haiku 50)
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hosts : Sanjuktaa Asopa & Kashiana Singh
not every color
has a name . . .
midnight jazz
---- Tiffany Shaw-Diaz
( Stardust haiku 50)
Yes, even I agree with Linda. What is more striking is L3 that zooms out a whole scenario of colours that are either traditional or raw, translucent or opaque, etc. And L 3 is a surprise element as you call it the 'spark-plug' Kala.. One can write it this way too
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midnight jazz ...
not every colour
has a name
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But the whole effect would just lay off. Beautiful poem; a rich and the depth of the midnight jazz and its environment creates another mood and as we read 'not every colour has a name' I feel the poet wants to convey something else, and it just stops midway.
Beautiful ku. The first two lines seem contradictory to the name specified on L3, but still Ls 1 & 2 are strong enough to get the message across. Nice poem.