hosts : Sanjuktaa Asopa & Aparna Pathak
her ashes
on my fingertips
the breath of an owl
-- Aidan Castle
( first frost #6, fall 2023 )
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hosts : Sanjuktaa Asopa & Aparna Pathak
her ashes
on my fingertips
the breath of an owl
-- Aidan Castle
( first frost #6, fall 2023 )
her ashes
on my fingertips
the breath of an owl
L2 acts as a pivot in a way.
L3 is very effective and poignant.
I like Mohua's comment.
Beautifully crafted pivot and ku with strong images. Amazing how the raw anguish and the poet's frame of mind is laid bare. Thank you for sharing.