A TUESDAY FEATURE
hosts: Muskaan Ahuja, Lakshmi Iyer
guest editor: an'ya
Please note:
Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.
Poets are requested to post poems (haiku/senryu) that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.
Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.
If a poet wants feedback, then the poet must mention 'feedback welcome' below each poem that is being posted.
Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.
The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.
Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!
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“Laughter is a Language”
--- Yoshiko Takada
Here are a few examples that show we must not forget to feel free to use a bit of subtle humor as well as real-life experiences in our haiku writing:
sometimes life
it stinks even more than
skunk cabbage
fast asleep
an old dog starts his new year
with flatulence
iffy cast
a fisherman and the river
exchange places
--- an’ya
Humorous Haiku Prompt: Post the humorous haiku you’ve written. Avoid senryu by using a kigo or at least nature-based references rather than only a human-nature reference.
26.02.2024
#2
Revised. Thanks Marilyn and Eavonka
a sly act
hopping on the scale
when no one's looking
Kalyanee Arandhara
Assam, India
Feedback most welcome
Original
25.02.2024
#2
a sly act
hoping on the weighing scale
when no one's looking
Kalyanee Arandhara
Assam, India
Feedback most welcome
24/2/24 1st
cruise of a lifetime
two bars
on the Covid strip
Marilyn Ashbaugh
USA
feedback welcome
#2
the teen next door
his new football
in our tall nettles
Keith Evetts Thames Ditton UK
comments welcome
#Revision1
25-02-24
self edit
trying to make
a thin egg omlette—
dreams broken to pieces
Padma Priya
India
#2
24-02-24
trying to make
thin egg omlette—ended up
with pieces of it
Padma Priya
India
(Feedback welcome)
#1
pre-paid funeral the lifetime guarantee
Keith Evetts UK
comment welcome