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laughALONG! 17 January

A TUESDAY FEATURE

host: Muskaan Ahuja

guest editor: Hifsa Ashraf


Flowers and Insects


“The earth laughs in flowers.”


― Ralph Waldo Emerson


A flower symbolizes joy and happiness that brings freshness and energy in our lives and in the lives of many creatures. Everyone must have enjoyed some funny childhood rhymes about flowers and insects. The buzz of a bee, the kiss of a butterfly, the swift flight of dragonfly from flower to flower, and the chirp of a cricket from a flowering bush, there is a lot to explore in nature and by adding humour in it may take you back to your own childhood.


In this context, a famous poem of Basho that I always find funny:


a bee

staggers out

of the peony


-- Basho Matsuo



and Issa's haiku:



garden butterfly—

the child crawls, it flies

crawls, it flies


-- Kobayashi Issa



Please write a poem up to five lines and bring smile on our faces.

27 comentarios


Hifsa  Ashraf
Hifsa Ashraf
20 ene 2023

budding love…

a red dragonfly darts

across the lily garden

feedback welcome!

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Hifsa  Ashraf
Hifsa Ashraf
22 ene 2023
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Thanks for the feedback! I think 'dart around' has various connotation here so I will keep it the way it is unless something more mysterious or deep comes up from the readers. :)

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Miembro desconocido
19 ene 2023

riotous weeds

the neighbor curses

his expensive fence


feedback welcome

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Hifsa  Ashraf
Hifsa Ashraf
18 ene 2023

two drones

buzzing around the rose

a blind date


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original


blind date... buzzing around the rose two drones feedback welcome!

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Hifsa  Ashraf
Hifsa Ashraf
20 ene 2023
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Thank you. :)

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Miembro desconocido
17 ene 2023

outdoor dining--

delightful feast

for mosquitoes


*Feedback Welcome

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Miembro desconocido
18 ene 2023
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Thanks for your comment, Hifsa. Will try to find another way to make the connection between outdoor dining and blood-thirsty mosquitoes.

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
17 ene 2023

Removed the two extra poems.

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Muskaan Ahuja
Muskaan Ahuja
17 ene 2023
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Thankyou for being so cooperative, Lakshmi!

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