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laughALONG! 11 February

Writer: Muskaan AhujaMuskaan Ahuja

A TUESDAY FEATURE

hosts: Muskaan Ahuja, K.Ramesh

guest editor: Milan Rajkumar


Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.


Poets are requested to post poems (haiku/senryu) that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.


Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.


If a poet wants feedback, then the poet must mention 'feedback welcome' below each poem that is being posted.


Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.


The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.


Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!

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On certain occasions, haiku possess a unique quality that provoke laughter or, at the very least, a gentle smile. Let us cherish those occasions, for they offer us a precious gift – the ability to laugh at ourselves and find solace in the shared human experience.



orthopedic clinic

a three-legged chair

outside the entrance


– Johannes Manjrekar




I invite you to write haiku that will make people laugh a little or smile in difficult times as they journey through life...



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#2, 16/2, edited


winter chill

dad neatly clips his dentures

on the clothesline


Lakshmi Iyer, India

Feedback welcome


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Yes, it seems something went wrong. Thank you

My father used to do with steel clips

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#1

15/02/2025


toothache

the dentist asks me

to smile wider


Srinivasa Rao Sambangi

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Thank you Joanna. The dentist wants to check if there is any infection. He wants to have a full view of the front teeth

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Kalyanee
Kalyanee
Feb 15

15.02.2025

#1


dad's glasses

lost ... and found

as his tiara


Kalyanee Arandhara

Assam, India


Feedback most welcome

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Kalyanee
Kalyanee
Feb 15
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Ha ha... Yes.. Thanks, Kanjini.

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mona bedi
mona bedi
Feb 15

Post #2

15.2.25


onion breath the lunch date turns sour


Mona Bedi

India


Feedback appreciated:)

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Yes Mona or the dreaded garlic breath, nicely told.

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#2 - 15/02/25


the rooster crows

before my 6am alarm

short night


Kanjini Devi, NZ

feedback welcome

'short night' is a kigo for summer (YTHS)

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Thank you, Joanna. I actually found it funny!

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