HAIKUsutradhar . weekly prompts
A FRIDAY FEATURE
hosts: Akila G. & Shreya Narang
month of August: Yesha Shah
Open Prompt . Open Hall
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haikuKATHA - the monthly journal from Triveni Haikai India!
founder/managing editor: Kala Ramesh
associate editors:
Akila G. Ashish Narain
Firdaus Parvez
Madhuri Pillai
Priti Aisola
Shalini Pattabiraman
Suraja Menon Roychowdhury Vandana Parashar
Haiku, senryu and haiga/shahai (photo haiku) posted here on this thread will be picked up for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal - haikuKATHA.
At the moment we are not looking at found poetry.
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For some more exciting news! CHECK THESE FORUMS ...
Tanka, kyoka and tanka-prose to be posted on TANKA TAKE HOME
and Haibun to be posted on THE HAIBUN GALLERY
It will help you tremendously if you learn to comment on 'triveni spotlight'
'open sky :: SAMVAAD' and 'thinkALONG'
Such good poems are posted.
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The poems you post will also be considered for the haikuKATHA Monthly Journal each month.
Due to the sudden increase in the activity, here are some quick guidelines, for HAIKUsutradhar:
1. Just ONE poem per day/ in 24 hours.
2. For each poem you share, please comment on ONE other poem which isn't yours!
3. Post only your unpublished, original poems.
4. If poets have NOT ASKED for FEEDBACK, please don't give. _()_
Poems previously published on your webpage or social media will be accepted.
Poems previously published in peer-reviewed or edited journals or anthologies as well as contest winners that were published elsewhere as such, will not be accepted.
4. IMPORTANT: if any member provides feedback on the poem in the comment section, the poet must decide on the final version and post it on top of the original version.
Or else the original unedited version on your thread will be picked up by us.
On your comment thread, you need to post your revised final version (if you have one!)
Edited version: Your final version of the poem goes first, so it will be easy for our team to consider that for the haikuKATHA journal.
Original version: Your first version of the poem remains - under your final version. The way it is shown here.
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The Prompt
He Ho. He Ho.
Yes! here we are with the OPEN HALL (open prompt) of HAIKUsutradhar for the month of August. An opportunity for all to let the wings of their creativity spread wide and fly in the sky of twinkling words. Write whatever comes to your mind, whatever your heart feels, whatever your eyes see, whatever sounds your ears are dancing to, spell your voice, and tell us what reflects your soul the most. We are waiting for your amazing poetry, holding our breath.
Give us your best shot.
Fri,2nd Sept.
Great idea, Lev! ( Edited as suggested)
even my shadow is green . . . deep forest
Feedbacks welcome for the edited version.
#1
deep forest ...
everything is green
even my shadow
Feedbacks welcome ( forgotten to write)
2/9/22 #1
Chicken Tikka... the Brahmin’s face sizzles red
Revised thanks to Daipayan and Ashish
in the pandal
the pitter-patter of rain
and off-tune bhajans
Original version:
in the pandal—
pitter-patter of rain
and off-tune bhajans
*pandal - (in India) a temporary shed erected for religious/other gathering
**bhajan - a devotional song
feedback appreciated
no time to speak -
busy bees
all
- Chittaluri Satyanarayana
*feedback appreciated.
cat’s mew
milk container exhausted
sad looks on both