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HAIKUsutradhar : 03 June 2022

HAIKUsutradhar . weekly prompts

A FRIDAY FEATURE

hosts: Akila G. & Shreya Narang

month of June: Paresh Tiwari



Picture Prompt


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haikuKATHA - the monthly journal from Triveni Haikai India!

founder/managing editor: Kala Ramesh

associate editors:

Akila G. Ashish Narain

Firdaus Parvez

Madhuri Pillai

Priti Aisola

Shalini Pattabiraman

Shobhana Kumar Suraja Menon Roychowdhury Vandana Parashar


Haiku, senryu and haiga/shahai (photo haiku) posted here on this thread will be picked up for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal - haikuKATHA. At the moment we are not looking at found poetry. ..................................................................................................... For some more exciting news! CHECK THESE LINKS ... Tanka, kyoka and tanka-prose to be posted on TANKA TAKE HOME and Haibun to be posted on THE HAIBUN GALLERY It will help you tremendously if you learn to comment on 'triveni spotlight' 'open sky :: SAMVAAD' and 'thinkALONG' Such good poems are posted. ........................................................................................................ The poems you post will also be considered for the haikuKATHA Monthly Journal from December 2021 onwards! Due to to the sudden increase in the activity, here are some quick guidelines, for all the three groups:

1. TWO poems per day.

2. For each poem you share, please comment on ONE other poem which isn't yours!

3. Post only your unpublished poems.


Poems previously published on your personal webpage or social media will be accepted.

Poems previously published in peer-reviewed or edited journals or anthologies as well as contest winners that were published elsewhere as such, will not be accepted.


4. IMPORTANT: if any member provides feedback on the poem in the comment section, it is the poet's duty to decide on the final version and post it on top of the original version.


Or else the original unedited version on your thread will be picked up by us.


On your comment thread you need to post your revised final version (if you have one!)


Edited version: Your final version of the poem goes first, so it will be easy for our team to consider that for the haikuKATHA journal.

Original version: Your first version of the poem remains - under your final version. The way it is shown here.


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The Prompt




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samir satam
samir satam
12 jun 2022

Revised (after Vandana's suggestion):


blurred ...

i watch her flight

take off


Original:


balloon ...

i watch her flight

take off


critique is welcome...)

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samir satam
samir satam
20 jun 2022
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@Vandana, Just saw your comment. Thanks for the suggestion. Let me think about a different L1.

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Daipayan  Nair
Daipayan Nair
10 jun 2022

the glitter

on her lips ...

Venus


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Robert Kingston
10 jun 2022

silence…

if all it takes is a penny

I’ll have two

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Robert Kingston
17 jun 2022
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Thank you Ashish

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Marcie Wessels
Marcie Wessels
09 jun 2022

watermelon gum

on the wind, a whiff

of sunscreen and chlorine

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Priti Aisola
Priti Aisola
09 jun 2022

blink of a moment

how full the circle before

the bubble bursts

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Vandana Parashar
Vandana Parashar
13 jun 2022
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Kala’s suggestion is great, Priti. Lovely ku.

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