haikaiTALKS: ONE, TWO and FOUR-LINE HAIKU - a saturday gathering_under the banyan tree
host: Kala Ramesh
29 July 2023
This week shall we try one, two and four-line haiku? As a look back on the last two months!
For your own poems: Only TWO ku per week, per prompt, per poet.
First post: You'll search and find a one, two or four-line haiku, you like.
You'll give your reason/s why you like it. Second post: This will be your first ku.
Third post:
This will be your second ku.
Please give your feedback on others' commentary and poems too. _()_
Have fun! Keep writing and commenting!
Third post:
My second unpublished ku:
the chaffinch's
rain-song
how many notes
in a storm
Alan Summers
Season: Spring to Summer
Bird: Chaffinch (Fringilla coelebs)
flooded field—
the aqua blue paint
on the rusty wheel
of a sluice gate
Post #3
sugarcane field
the e v e r lasting
sweetness
of our first kiss
Feedback appreciated:)
#3
a wren hops to the beat of its pulsing chest tweet tweet
Feedback please. _()_
sprig of mint—
the cold sweat
on a tumbler
of iced tea